Thunder and Lightning
by Kai Heng
Thunder sparks,
BOOM! BOOM!! BOOM!!!
Rain and hail knocks on the door.
God suddenly growls in anger.
Grim clouds explode as loud as bombs,
Howling leaves and windows shake.
Family dinners disturbed by flickering lights.
BOOM!BOOM!!BOOM!!!
Blinding Sky
By Tyler
Blinding dark sky up above.
People scampering indoors
To take shelter.
Lightning charging across the sky.
Thunder smashing objects like a fist.
But I'm safe.
Tennis coaching.
We enjoyed our tennis lessons with the coaches from Auckland Tennis.
Gymnastics 2009
Photos taken at the gym competitions.
Cup Cake day
Room 4 baked and sold cup cakes to raise funds for the SPCA.
Book week.
Visitors to this Blog
General School Photos
8 comments:
Kai- Heng and Tyler your poems are great and they want to make me jump.
matthew
Kai Heng, I heard the growls that you speak of last night! Your use of a range of poetic devices made a great picture for me.
Miss R :-)
Tyler, it was great to see how much enjoyment you got from writing this poem. I loved the vocabulary that you contributed to the group. You use a range of poetic devices, I especially like your simile. There is nothing like feeling safe and dry inside during a storm.
Miss R :-)
Tyler, your poem is AWESOME! It's like an atomic bomb-very powerful!
Kai Heng
Kai Heng, I liked the poem it was good. I liked the part when you said god radg of thander
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