The stormy clouds congregate into one dark gloomy cloud.
Once again , yellow strikes reappear in the sky where you can't see.
Once people hear the signal, that's when they flee inside.
The rain is inpatient, smashing on the door trying to enter the house.
Doors shut, so no entry for the rain and I am snuggled inside.
Safe.
MatthewOnce again , yellow strikes reappear in the sky where you can't see.
Once people hear the signal, that's when they flee inside.
The rain is inpatient, smashing on the door trying to enter the house.
Doors shut, so no entry for the rain and I am snuggled inside.
Safe.
5 comments:
Great to see you including a range of poetic devices in your poetry, Matthew. I loved the use of personification for the rain.
It is easy for me to visualise your storm because of the words you have chosen.
Miss R :-)
That was awesome Matt. That was good personefercation from Mal
that was awesome matt
Great work on your poem Matt. I like how you use your words Tyler:)
WoW Matt that was a great poem it blew me away.
Daniel
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